Writing samples

Students will be asked to complete a Writing task in the narrative genre. The sample formats provided are similar to the format of the Writing stimulus that students will encounter in the Writing tests.

To view the samples, click on the links below:

Assessing the Writing Task

Students' writing will be marked by assessors who have received intensive training in the application of a set of ten (10) writing criteria. The criteria are described below and in the attached PDF document.

Students are required to write on the topic provided in the test stimulus material. An example of the stimulus material can be found in the samples above.

Descriptions of the Writing Criteria

Audience

The writer’s capacity to orient, engage and affect the reader

Text Structure

The organization of narrative features including orientation, complication and resolution into an appropriate and effective text structure

Ideas

The creation, selection and crafting of ideas for a narrative

Character and Setting

Character: The portrayal and development of character

Setting: The development of a sense of a place, time and atmosphere

Vocabulary

The range and precision of language choices

Cohesion

The control of multiple threads and relationships over the whole text, achieved through the use of referring words, substitutions, word associations and text connectives

Paragraphing

The segmenting of text into paragraphs that assists the reader to negotiate the narrative

Sentence Structure

The production of grammatically correct, structurally sound and meaningful sentences

Punctuation

The use of correct and appropriate punctuation to aid the reading of the text

Spelling

The accuracy of spelling and the difficulty of the words used 

 

Criteria for Marking